Reviews for Fade To Black
nikol chapter 2 . 8/24/2016
Like it but I wasn't satisfied with the non-ending ending. Really though there should have been more to the story but... oh well.
Either way it was nicely written.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
Gurl where the other story at?!
Shocked chapter 2 . 4/22/2014
I can believe it.
23 years apart.
What part of that is not a problem?
When she's 27, he's 50 already! And she's becoming 27 in what, 10 years?
Trad chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
I loved this! This was awesome omg! Just everything was so...ugh so hard to explain, this is just a beautiful piece of work
Fabulous as FCUK chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
Anna Julia Cooper chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
Surprising ending, pregnant and everything. The setting and charcaterization reminds of my highschool years were an affair had taken place and the teacher did in fact lose his license to educate. It was a shame because he could teach English, Geography, History, Spanish, and Alegbra. And they let him go. But someone snitched them out. I would be interested in reading the rest of their story if you've already penned it. Especially her parents, his family, the wife, and other people around Madison's age. Age- at the age of 18 myself I always felt like people were trying to make sure that I acted like I was 18 and not any older.

Great treatment of teenage virginity and sexuality, though I wished ol' girl would have used a condom! However, when you are wanting to be loved such as Wes and Madison, you may forget such things. I wouldn't worry too much- he got the money to support her. Congratulations on getting a BA in Fiction. I wonder myself if I can write when I received mine in foreign language and English was not one of them!
StephieT1973 chapter 2 . 7/23/2011
I just got gone reading this, and enjoyed it immensely! Nice job!
xXxGingergirlxXx chapter 2 . 10/26/2010
Aw! He's such a nice guy! I'm a sap too lol! Luv it!
Ohh chapter 2 . 9/17/2010
Where are you! This story is to good! Please update with the new story.
oHH chapter 2 . 9/7/2010
wow! This was a good story. Please give a sequel to this.
AmyDSC chapter 2 . 5/14/2010
OMG! amazing!

I love teacher/student

so good, well done!
sjrucker chapter 2 . 11/9/2009
LOVED IT! Please keep writing!
Lexy7432 chapter 2 . 8/16/2009
cool, liked it
merecedeslove chapter 2 . 5/7/2009
Aww loved the ending, the style, and the whole story.
in the still of the night chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
You know, I really like this! A lot.

Its very scandelous and out of the box.

But, it's very addicting and VERY well written.

I like the ending.

Its a good one, and not too cheesy.

Great job! :]
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