I hate to use a crude word but that make me wanna fuckin' cry! It's really good. -MC

Oh...neat...I love the dialogue. The descriptive words are very nice too it's well balanced and yet, active.-please read BloodLust or any other Blizzard Comics story thankies

That's so cool. Though I don't know what a Yani is. I like it, keep writing.

That was really, really intricate, emotional and touching piece of work. Whether you intended it or not it came out beautifully.
Excellent writing and great character development in such a short space.
Overall...amazing.

I loved this. Excellent, fabulous, magnificent! THis one is going on my favourites list. _

Wow, that was absolutely beautiful. Just gorgeous. WOnderful. *checks thesaurus* Excellent, astonishing, great, awesome, perfect, cool, wicked, sweet, umm...hell, lets just leave it at that. Wonderful story. *sad too*

hmm... this looks like a good story, but it looked too long for me ... so I only read the first three lines. But... um... yeah