Reviews for The Thinnest Blue Ice
jojoba-music-girl chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
I liked how you kept using the words 'my friend'. It makes the poem more powerful than it already is. My favorite line is "all I can do is monitor my words and juggle glass", great how you came up with that! Well, um, overall great work, as you can read in this review ;-) Oh, and by the way: happy new year!

jojoba
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
the title and the part about it is beautiful...I also like all the religious allusions
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
Nice work. I liked the first line, the line, "all I can do is monitor my words and juggle glass" and the ending was well done as well. Keep up the good work.