|Reviews for In the Lab|
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
this is incredible.
it's so rich in the interesting formulas you added
the second stanza is my favorite, but it is the one that bothered me most in this piece-too solid, dry, and there are just i guess too many theories associated with ground/air though i adore the "Tongues white as/Gravity" relay you tied with it
i think it's an insanely beautiful stanza...how you worded it.
actually, i just love the thoughts behind the whole piece.
your children stanza is so sharp (neat comparison/contrast thing).