Reviews for concentrated stillness
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
haunting, yet... the slightest bit of light in the background

well done

keep writing
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
I liked this it was very sweet. I'm sure she's very proud of her little girl. It's loverly.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
aw. i like this. it's very sweet.
underrose chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
absolutely beautifully done.
i.am.pockets chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
amazing! you're a wonderful writer! i like the rythum and the word use. definately keep it up.

thanks for the review.
tearing hands chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
In places, especially in the middle, it seems like the flow drags a little, but overall the rhythm seems good. My favorite part is definitely the ending.