Reviews for Typical
BarrientosP.I chapter 7 . 5/5/2008 this story! hope to read more!
absentminded23 chapter 7 . 5/5/2008
cute story. you should update more often!
RhythmOfMySoul chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Great intro chapter! I really liked it!
Krystal Mauritius chapter 6 . 2/7/2008
I'll be honest, this story bothers me. Jack and his friend are both scum. There is nothing charming about the treatment towards her. The chasing after her, pushing her against the wall, and grabbing her arms, she is being harassed. What bothers me even more is that she goes along with it, even when she knows it is a bad idea. I really hope you are going somewhere with this, and that somehow, there is more to Jack than meets the eye. As of now, I am not convinced.
hotcheri chapter 4 . 1/2/2008
nice story!hope u update soon
laternflickeredinmymind chapter 3 . 12/30/2007
i like it.

I really want Jack and Erica together. Maybe they both can help each other out with their problems.

cant wait for the next chapter!

~xxstarryeyedxx~ chapter 2 . 12/27/2007
Interesting you could go in so many directions with this story at this point. I like it.
laternflickeredinmymind chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
i can't wait to see what happens next!

update soon!

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