This is quite gorgeous! Beautiful, enjoyable.

Okay. I am skeptic to this piece. I find it strange that you can call it love when you have only had a glance at a person. If there was any love involved, it was the IDEA of the other.

Because of that, the story just feels very cheap. Since the love is false, what is the point?

I did appreciate the ending, though. It's as if it said; go and take a shot at love, the world won't collapse. Nice message. But it could have been delivered a better way. Then again maybe that wasnt the message at all...

- Frac, from the Review marathon (link in profile]