Reviews for Seven
Thalia Cross chapter 8 . 8/16/2009
You must finish this! It's absolutely wonderful!
papermask chapter 8 . 6/1/2009
I can't wait to see what happens next. I adore this story.
papermask chapter 5 . 5/31/2009
This is such an amazing story. I really, really enjoy it. I can't wait to read more. :)
Eilinora chapter 2 . 8/15/2008
Really boring, and reeks of teenage girl. I like Neil Gaiman's take on Snow White better. He had necrophilia and vampires in his. Yours is just... I don't know... Snow White in the tone of a high school romance novel. Anyway, Neil Gaiman also knows how to write, so that's another advantage he has over you. Oh, and he's intelligent, while you're not. Basically, he's just a lot better than you. Maybe you should look up a real author like him sometime, and then you'll learn how badly you fail at writing.
bluehyperpixie chapter 8 . 7/24/2008
oh this was cool i like the whole vamp idea

i'm glad u stuck 2 the basic structure of snow white and the whole story really works

the story's great

byexx
B.D.Smith chapter 8 . 6/22/2008
i'm really looking forward for more

i love it so far
Atamagaokashii Ookami chapter 8 . 6/15/2008
and we learn more .

red hair and green eyes, yauY!

i didn't remember the red hair part afore this

yes am obsessive with hair...

thanks for updating and hope you continue soon .
romance at short notice chapter 8 . 6/13/2008
HOORAY! YOU UPDATED!

I don't think I ever reviewed this story, and that is my mistake because I've been hoping and praying that you would continue. I'm an idiot like that.

Stories told from a different perspective always capture my attention, and this one is the best so far. (:

I'm watching, and I'll review more often!

romance.
Drake Van chapter 8 . 6/11/2008
hmm...interesting...keep it coming, this is really good

Drake Van
killer chipmunk chapter 8 . 6/10/2008
I'm so glad to hear from you.

It's been so long. Yea.

Anyways still awsome. Hope

there'll be another chap soon.
DiamondEyedDog chapter 7 . 6/10/2008
I just finished reading it, and I'm really looking forward to more!
perdita chapter 7 . 6/9/2008
this is a LOT better than i thought it would be

i'm rather impressed keep it up
DiamondEyedDog chapter 5 . 6/9/2008
I really like this so far, seems like an interesting take on the Grimm's tale. One tiny little thing... When you use words like "species" and "hyperventilate" it kind of kills the old-fashioned mood you're trying to set, because they wouldn't use words like that back then, also some of the modern slang... Sorry, its nit-picky, but I think it would help set the tone to avoid using words like that. I'm looking forward to more soon!
R. M. Kent chapter 7 . 6/9/2008
I've really been enjoying the story, which it totally different, while holding onto all those features we all love in our fairytales. The character interaction, expecially in these last chapters, was great, and I can't wait to see how the story progresses.
Drake Van chapter 7 . 6/9/2008
I really enjoyed this story and I think you are a very talented writer.

Though one area in which I think you let yourself down was in creating the (not sure how else to refer to them...) "dwarves" into vampires and a werewolf; the rest of your story has been highly original and this is such a cliche these days that it was a bit of a let down. I understand that you can't exactly change it now, since it's a pivetful aspect of the story, but that's just what I think.

I do like the idea of vampirism being a disease: it has crossed my mind before, but I've never read story with that version until now - I like it :D

Anyway, I hope this helped. Update soon please, of course.

Drake Van
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