Reviews for Empty
Peanuts Factory chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Moments of hesitation and depression...

How long will that last?

Hopefully not that long...

I thought it was a nice bittersweet poem ;)
Jecai chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Sometimes it just feels bland and tiring. Acute bursts of it are usually my fault. But I mean overall, sometimes it seems bland. Never entirely though.

'Breaking even' describes it well. That was the first phrase I think I 'got', and pieced together the rest from there.

A good short piece.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
I like this the a lot.. it flows nicely and the ending is really great