Reviews for Humidity
felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Pretty. This is a picture of visible spectrum and I love it. It's refreshing because poetry so often tries to be more than it is... and this is just pure imagry. It's quite nice.

Good work with this one. My favorite part is the pools of fallen thought... I've wanted to do something with what I've termed 'mind puddles' for a while... just never got around to it. Excellent!

Felicia.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
short and simple yet the imagery kind of shows deeper meaning below the surface. a little vague yet at the same time, pretty blunt. i kind of like this. it's good. and the ending was random and unexpected. i like those kind of endings. good work.