Reviews for Brighter than the Sun
felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Very nice. I want to hear this as the song it's meant to be... it's very cute. Very romantic. I love the chorus, especially... although I suppose that's what most people like about a song. I like verses, too, but this chorus is just too good to pass up.

Very nicely started; I look forward to seeing the rest soon.

Felicia.
sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Nice work. I particularly liked the line, “the blazing bullet from the dull empty gun.” It creates a really vivid image. Keep writing! (On a random note, I really like the sound of your penname.)