Reviews for i need to light the world
QuietSamuel chapter 1 . 2/12/2016
Thank you for writing this. :) Its beautiful!
Reuel chapter 1 . 9/22/2014
This is beautiful
The Lazy Cat chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
This Poem reflects me perfectly. You did an amazing job. I wrote a poem like it called 'She Is The Lazy Cat'. Please read and review it! Thank you for writing this poem, it is great!
Hiwiwy chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
very powerful.
fairies and snapple chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
You so, so capture all these feelings incredibly well. It's like, I totally feel that way sometimes and you put it in words so perfectly. I loved this.
yaboyzapimp28 chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
wow. I think this is the favorite of my favored poems. lol. very very nice.
Peter chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
LOVE LOVE LOVE this. It was so heartfelt, and I usually don't like it when people don't use caps at all, but for this one it really worked. I just can just imagine this poem scrawled across the wall of a city, or in a long empty room, waiting for someone to read it. I haven't read a poem this good in a very long time, and it really put a smile on my face. i think that is my purpose too. . . .
generically beautiful chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
This is an amazingly powerful piece. Beautifully written, beautifully formatted, just lovely. It's going on my favorites as soon as I'm done typing this review. )

Thank you for your review of my poem, I appreciate it!

Keep writing.

perhaps then you'd notice me chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
describes exatly where im at right now. its really inspired me. thank you.
alison chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
- go to 'forum'

- go to 'off-topic' section and look for the topic, 'i would like to apologize...' that's the argument going on

the issue is that i was literally forcing Christ on others who never mentioned that they were Christians

but trust me, if you read what i've said, i am NOT hiding my faith.. i'm simply not pushing religion on others anymore and will start a topic for Christian self-injurers and offer advice related to my faith to those who would want it, but what i'm doing is NOT hiding my faith in Christ, oh no NEVER. i'm not afraid, it just hurts you know? they're being really vicious, not because i said i was a Christian but because i was being over the top about my beliefs.. if you read some of my posts you'll see it
Alaizabel Davis chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
wow, i absolutely love this! it's amazing. this is exactly how i feel sometimes... i'm always too afraid to do or say things and this totally inspired me. definitely one of my favs. keep it up!
by His blood chapter 1 . 1/7/2008
i'm really scared

i was on a self-injury website and was overly trying to help people using my faith and a lot of people were offended and are angry with me

i realize now that i was depending on my own ability to help others and not on God, and i feel horrible

i'm scared

i feel so horrible and i'm going to break down and cry as soon as i get off the internet and pray with all my heart for forgiveness because i screwed up so horribly

it was there all along, God's warning not to trust my own mouth but i was stubborn and ignored it and i'm scared

i'm so scared that He's angry with me

i'm so scared that He's looking down at me and mad at me right now and disappointed and thinking i screwed up and i'm still a sinner who makes so many mistakes and i'm crying and i'm scared

i don't want Him to be angry with me

but i screwed up so bad

please help me

respond to this through review reply please

please as soon as you can
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
You made me want to get up and jog a mile just for the fun of it (although I think I would have been the one to fall, cause I can't run to well in slippers...) I thought it was really inspiring. It's a homerun C.
its.Nothing.Special chapter 1 . 1/5/2008 i'd favorite this a thousand times if i could.

[and dance ballet only to fall on my face at the feet of a person/carrying roses for the lovely girl next to me and just laugh for/all of the serious people in the audience that were holding it in.]

you're brilliant. and this was absolutely gorgeous. loveloveloved it. made me shiver at times. that's how good you are. keep writing.

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