|Reviews for Life's tough with Overprotective Brother's around|
| Marina chapter 3 . 8h
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/17/2014
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
Lazy is right. This is messy garbage.
| Lisanna chapter 3 . 1/17/2013
Please write more, I want to know what happens in the 4th chapter!
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/12/2012
| nicole hall chapter 3 . 9/3/2011
omggg this is fricken amazing! i have older brothers and an over protective dad... my mom lives in a different state. anyways this is such a great story and i can totally relate to the character because right now i am dating my 16 year old brothers best friend there is alot of tension around the house!when r u writting the next chapter i need to no! love this story sooo much!
| Megan H chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
Sooooo Good you should write this series more often!
| AmandaDeawattiePersaud chapter 2 . 4/22/2009
were the rest of it at?lol
| UKKitty chapter 3 . 3/9/2009
This is a really intriguing story and one that I found unexpectedly sinister. There's genuinely something really...odd...about this family; about their over-protectiveness of Carol, and the way they behave as if any relationship is a betrayal of the family's trust.
And I truly *love* dark and sinister stories. ;-)
I hope you update this soon, I want to know more about where this is going...
| jujube chapter 3 . 3/25/2008
cute story but in the first chapter u didnt say the age of mickael u only gave the age of alex and matt.
as for the dad he's way too much protective/jealous, come on not letting his 3 year old daughter play with a boy loll .
anyways hope u'll update soon , with a longer chapter :)
| Mahvish122003 chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
i love where ur taking this! hope tht u update soon!
| Katherine-the-greate chapter 3 . 3/11/2008
Um kay. there are a lot of grammar errors and over this whole story there are tons of periods where there need to be question marks. other than that, i really like the plot so far and can't wait to see how the relationship works out. ] update soon.
| Katherine-the-greate chapter 2 . 3/11/2008
another fun chapter. I enjoied reading it. I hope the boys will be okay with Alex eventually. thanks for posting
| Katherine-the-greate chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
nice beginning. IT's funny. I wish i had brother like that...even if they do seem dangerous. great work
| tghinotecnad chapter 3 . 3/11/2008
i like. check some spelling, and a couple of left out or incorrect words here and there. other than that i think its good.