Reviews for Two Guns, One Bullet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() /woot! I am so glad your back...where have you been? Man, I can't wait until Lex knocks them all on their asses... |
![]() ![]() ![]() OI DUDE NEXT CHAPTER lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE WOMAN NOW I WANT MORE AND YOU HAVE TO REA DMY STORY ON HERE 2 BITCHLING LOVE YA DUDE TAM |
![]() ![]() ![]() DAMN HARRIET MARRY that was fucking hot i lovve it and i DONT hate kai. i understand where he is coming from |
![]() ![]() ![]() All 4 of these boys fall for her don't they? I can feel it. You have got me addicted. Hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha I'm sorry, you mjisunderstood me. Yes i understand its one point of view and i understand why the paragraphs are in therr. Im talking about the quotations. So when Lexi speaks and Leah replies type of thing. I was commenting on how the quotations are in the same paragraphs and thats what is making it hard for me to read. srry for the misunderstanding |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi um i just started reading ur story and i just thought id let you know that its really hard to read when you dont start off a different person speaking with a new paragraph |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey slacka where have you been great story by the way update soon Sam |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude it's not a half bad story, in fact i quite like it. post some- more soon SAM - Super Bitch, out to make your life mildly interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() keep writing its good i like it |