Reviews for Maybe tomorrow, you'll love me tender
Written chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
wow, I love it. maybe tomorrow.
Kapoo chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
And maybe the butcher eats salad.
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
wow. just wow. very nice rhyming, it was so effortless, and everything flowed really well. very nice job.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Such a vivid description. I love the way that you wrote this and the structure. Such bittersweet thoughts, love is never what we want it to be.

Keep it up.
The Last Maroon chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Wow. This is one great display of artistic ability. The image was painted in such a vivid way it seems as if the words came alive as I read them. The raw emotion here definitely sets it aside from other pieces that I have read. I think anyone who has ever experience a onesided love affair can relate to this piece. However, the detail and again, the emotion make it a situation that anyone can empathize with. Great Work
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
I love the beginning how you tell when the only time he comes to you is... and I also really love the ending.. so hopeful even when you probably really shouldnt be
Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
This is raw bitterness, I wouldn't be surprised if the author was already aware that he'll never find true love with this person. Excuse me on that, because I don't know this person as well as you do. In my opinion and from what I've read, keeping a relationship with this person seems fleeting and hopeless.

The underlying emotion of anger and misery is very evident in this poem, and I like how you ended it with 'maybe tomorrow' will be a better day. Like this girl is like a lottery, maybe tomorrow I'll get something better. Maybe. What if.

I hope you find your happiness and no when to call it quits.

This was very well written, don't pass this poem off as worthless. Keep writin, good luck.