|Reviews for Striving for perfection|
| Quitisential Bee chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
That kept me hooked all the way through! Wow. Good one. I'm not entirely sure what happened, but following the thoughts of the narrator kept me reading right through. Perhaps a little more clarity story wise, but amazing on the writing. AMAZING! Is there a next chapter? (a fav)
| lupine-eyes chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
You have wonderful descriptions and lines in here. They are simply... absorbing. Its a great concept, and you bring it through just beautifully. "‘Sticks and stones’, full of lies, words can kill, embellish your demise." It's brillent.
I can only hope there will be a next chapter, and will wait with bated breath until there is.