|Reviews for A doll named Femi|
| Mourning Sickness chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
This is lovely.
| Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
I disagree with Fellows-I think this is a very pretty poem. It's more like a story, almost.
Great job, Kloun!
| Fellows chapter 1 . 12/29/2007
Well, hum, when I was reading this I was expecting it to be better-it's well-like a flower stalk with no bloom, or just one little bud-it's alright as a ruff draft, but one can see right through it; I understand what you were getting at here, but it just lacks that extra gleam that catches the eye once more. But, it really does have some wonderful lines to it, they just need more kick.