|Reviews for Silence|
| Anex .B. Cougar chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
In such a short time on Fiction press you've managed to author alot of poems, from what I've read you have a good feel for writing. your writing has a flow and rythme to it. Keep up the good work
| LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
This is brilliant!
So sweet...kinda sad! But all in all great!
| Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
So I said I'd review your poems (I think) when I had the time, and today, I do (I'm home sick :( and too exhausted to start my homework).
I love the emotions in this poem, and the way you describe silence as a sort of saftey blanket. I think we can all relate to this, having someone we looked up to ultimately dissappoint us. Lovely poem.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Good poem. You worded it well. It flows nicely.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
wow, this was a really unique way of putting it. kudos. i loved it. sorry if i lack constructive criticism, the only thing that i can tell you is how to get rid of the double spacing (when you submit the document click "edit" and then click "shift" and "enter" after every line.) hope that does something for you. good work. keep writing. )