Reviews for Making It
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
hmm, I like this. Very good.

Faith
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
i love this piece.

the rhythms and the imagery you included really expressed your point well.

the ending (esp the last two lines) was a little ... redundant i guess

i just think you can write better than it

but despite that little critique, i really think this is a neat piece.