|Reviews for Making It|
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
hmm, I like this. Very good.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
i love this piece.
the rhythms and the imagery you included really expressed your point well.
the ending (esp the last two lines) was a little ... redundant i guess
i just think you can write better than it
but despite that little critique, i really think this is a neat piece.