Reviews for Misfortunes in a Spotless Mind
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
i kinda like this. intriguing. well written. good imagery. good work. )
Gemma Lovell chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Not your best, but really good all the same. Some of the imagery you use is great! There is something that I don't like about the second verse-maybe just becasue it's shorter, I'm not sure. I think it disrupts the flow o fthe poem. The other three verses are very well-written. Nice work!

Love, Gemma