pls i NEED the rest. this has so much potential

why do i torture myself by reading unfinished stories? :'( this is so good dammit

So... Is this Story going to be worked on? Or has it hit the discontinued stack, which would be a pity cause its a really good story.

It was interesting and great to read this story. I like how the main character wasn't the sort of cliché royalty I've bumped into many times. I hope you'll get to update as soon as possible, 'cause I'd love to read more.

Whats next, whats next?

whoa! i absolutely adore ur writig style! u showed the distaste for ingraine clearly and eloquently, but didnt overexaggerate or make her sound unrealistically unappealing. and nyx is so hot! :D

please update soon! i look forward to reading more :D

I love it! I love Nyx's character and the plot is a good one. I like all the fantasy elements you added in, with the magic and dragons...it's really amazing. Please, please start writing/updating again. It's great.

This is so interesting! I hope you are planning to continue it. I can't wait to find out what's really going on between Nyx and Amick. I'm a huge fan of anything dragon, so please, please keep going with this story!

I want to know what's going on to. Could you please update this story?

I'm excited. This sounds really good.

Hey good chapter. Very nice. Amick sounds like a fun character.

There were just a few mistakes.

For example:

"And now, I had to let him go." should be "And now, I have to let him go."

But otherwise good, I really enjoyed it.

This is a very very cute story. I really like it. the chapters were short, but I still fell in love with the characters of Nyx and Amick. So, I would hope that you could update it, upon your earliest convience? I'll be eagerly awaiting that time...

I've enjoyed this story so far...hoping you'll finish it. (:

oh I am loving this story so far. I love the whole fantasy background and it is really original and descriptive while still using words used in real life.

I love how unique this story is. I found it off another author's favorites, and I'm so glad I did.

Your characters are completely enthralling. Nyx is intriguing, and I want to know more about him. There is a lot of fun to be had with such a character. Amick is strange, and seems to be a little bit of a mix between characters right now as though he hasn't been quite set yet- but I like it in him. It makes the changes he is going through that much more confusing, in a good way.

I think that the kingdom and all the politics need to have a bit more detail. It's interesting, the sudden shift between worlds, but a little abrupt for the flow of the story. Building up a little more to the shift, or even just adding detail as the story progresses, would remedy this and give the reader a more solid background. It would also make the reader feel closer to Amick. Adding more detail of Amick and Nyx's relationship when Amick is King would also be a good thing.

Please post a new chapter soon! I really enjoy this story and would love to see where it's going!