|Reviews for The end of another year and|
| LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
It's a good effect having some in the middle and some on the left! It's a great poem...I like the last line (I say that a lot...but it's true I often think the last line sums up a poem, so it needs to be a gd line, And it is!)
| Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
I love the emotions described in this. There are several ways I interpret this, and I like each of them. It is very sad how friends/lovers grow apart and become strangers. I can definitely relate.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Great job at expressing emotions. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
interesting. i kinda like this. kinda cute. kinda hopeful. good work. )
| Thomicas chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
I like how this is written. Very well done.
The way you have put the second verse to the right seems pointless to me though, as it doesn't really add anything.
But like I said: This is a good poem! Keep up the good work.