Reviews for One Step Too Far
xx chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
reads like naruto (itasasu) fanfic. think up your own characters
PhaithMcCoy chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
Aw, I liked this one even more. Although...I'm curious...where/when does this take place?

Very good, once again. I loved it.

-Phaith