So, so true, sadly enough.

Well thought out.

i love how it seems to have a rhyme scheme, but then you read the next line and it's gone. it's a wodnerful technique. i really like this poem. it has a lot of feeling in it, and i like that it's sort of conversation-like.

live, laugh, love.

Creating a Dream

simple but heartfelt. nice.

I like this a lot. It has a genuine feeling to it, you can tell the writer's emotions are real. The ending really pulled the entire piece together nicely. You've done a great job with this piece. Nicely done.

"The words are full

But they cancel out into empty phrases

Too vague or too you

Either way, untrue"

I know how that goes all too well, but I could've never found the words like you did. I like this, a lot.

Cassandra

Good poem. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~