|Reviews for Untrue|
| effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
So, so true, sadly enough.
Well thought out.
| Alphabetical Dreams chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
i love how it seems to have a rhyme scheme, but then you read the next line and it's gone. it's a wodnerful technique. i really like this poem. it has a lot of feeling in it, and i like that it's sort of conversation-like.
live, laugh, love.
Creating a Dream
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
simple but heartfelt. nice.
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I like this a lot. It has a genuine feeling to it, you can tell the writer's emotions are real. The ending really pulled the entire piece together nicely. You've done a great job with this piece. Nicely done.
| NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
"The words are full
But they cancel out into empty phrases
Too vague or too you
Either way, untrue"
I know how that goes all too well, but I could've never found the words like you did. I like this, a lot.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Good poem. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.