Reviews for Untrue
effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 2/27/2008
So, so true, sadly enough.

Well thought out.
Alphabetical Dreams chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
i love how it seems to have a rhyme scheme, but then you read the next line and it's gone. it's a wodnerful technique. i really like this poem. it has a lot of feeling in it, and i like that it's sort of conversation-like.

live, laugh, love.

Creating a Dream
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
simple but heartfelt. nice.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
I like this a lot. It has a genuine feeling to it, you can tell the writer's emotions are real. The ending really pulled the entire piece together nicely. You've done a great job with this piece. Nicely done.
NothingMoreNothingLess chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
"The words are full

But they cancel out into empty phrases

Too vague or too you

Either way, untrue"

I know how that goes all too well, but I could've never found the words like you did. I like this, a lot.

Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Good poem. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~