|Reviews for Operation: Save Our Souls|
| FellowMan chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
Well, hum, the only paragraph I really liked was the second to last one (I quite liked, in fact)-the others seem lacking-ok, so, alliteration alliteration alliteration-fine-but try a more understated approach to this tool; it seems a bit overly stretched in most of the paragraphs. :)
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
wow. that was good too.
powerful. different. wonderful.
i loved this one.