Reviews for Tonight
Enigmatic Paramedic chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
This makes me shiver, in a totally good way.

The second stanza is my favorite.
Zeurpiet chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
This is extremely well written. The reader can easily understand the speaker's feelings and sympathizes with them. This is very chilling a very realistic. Wonderfully chilling.
Julius Gillian chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
Hmm, I would leave the author note out of this. In my opinion it would make this 'seem' more authentic.

You give a wonderfully miserable picture of your feelings. The first stanza was amazing the way you play with words. Like a cold sun and your perspective because of the way you feel.

I enjoy how you make the objects in your poem seem to be disconnected and lifeless.