Pretty cute :p Good job, that would have been majorly embarrassing! I couldn't stand that! lol

although Bryce is HOT,

matt is sweet ;)

Cool... :)

Hahaha... :)

Cute, too. :)

Kya~ This was so super cute! And hilarious! I love your candid nature

Nice :-) Although, the whole Matt thing is given too little explanation and just... happens. The bit where she's talking about how Matt's her second best friend is good, though, foreshadowing-wise. It just needs a little more :-)

. Matt sounds like me. xD *sigh* When she was like, 'Your life is like a comedy.' I was like, crap. xD Yesterday I decided that I was going to be serious because I don't really think anybody takes me seriously, and I changed my laugh to being like, "Heh."

Until my friend was like. 'UGH WTF STOP LAUGHING LIKE THAT.'

Oh well. :3

Bryce was the perfect name for that guy. xD Aw. I just love your stories. They're so realistic/not overly dramatic and annoying. I mean, all of your characters (you especially did a good job with Matt/Bryce/and uh...the MC) are so like... realistic. :D

And I like Darren. xD He makes me think of this kid.

Yay. New story from Dancingchachafruit. :3

Write more soon or I'll kill you with a coconut.

-Sally :D

It's

so

CUTE!

God, I love it so much

Thanks for writing!

Yes! All men suck! (Excluding Matt, who seems adorable)

Ugh. Dontcha just hate guys that think they're the specialest thing in the whole wide world? I just wanna tell them to get a room with themselves.

I love to hear you laugh. My eyes just sparkled with glee. Ehehehe, ya gotta love 'im.

Uh, anyway, gorgeous story. Cutesicles! (I.. just made that word up. Oh well. I'm tired.)

YAY! Awesome! I love it!

AW

Brilliant story, very sweet :-)

aw this was so cute )

I really enjoyed reading your story, and miss reading your full length story. I started reading this story and then got distracted and came back to it later. I thought that Matt was actually her cousin, and so at the end when they started kissing I was like '...' Anyway, just thought I'd mention thatt

Matt strangely reminds me of a British guy named Matt who was on The Last Comic Standing, although he has dark brown hair...

Ah! Story was great; I think I would've cried if that happened to me in a ritzy restaurant.

Aw, that was so incredibly swet! :D I LOVE it!