Reviews for Sleep
In the Rye chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
i like it. it sounds real.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Great job on description. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a good day.

~Twilight Starr~
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
This is gorgeous. It's very simple, but sometimes the simplest things are the most beautiful. I love how I get the visual of puzzle pieces fitting together, like the two bodies here are meant to be together. The first four lines are stellar - all the e's really work well to keep the reader reading. Fantastic. Keep writing! :)