Reviews for Invisible Prison
felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
If you want to define 'bail' as 'throwing a stone into the side of your house.'

Nice. Simple and (maybe this is just me) but it has a bit of more immature language than I'm used to you using, which sort of lends it the perspective of little kid... or else (and this is how I was reading it) you weren't quite sure what you wanted to get across. That's sort of evident to me especially in the last stanza...

Having said that, I like this as a start to something more. It's just not as strong as I think you can make it. Sorry.

Felicia.
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
interesting. i've read a lot of poetry and nothing quite like this. i mean, something similar but nothing quite like it. i like the fact that it's unique. good work. keep writing.

oh, and have a happy new year! )