Reviews for Fear and Blood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. God. This is epic! I made a good choice for a first story to read on here! You're a great writter and I hope you have better luck next time with a job. The only suggestion I have is to proof read, there were alot of simple typos, I'm not really one to talk though. ." |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Job I absoultly loved it... it was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nuuoo i'm going to miss this story so much. It was incredible. :( I hope you start another vampire romance story. Maybe if you a do a few of them, you could alternate endings with humans being turned or not. :D Anyhow, I loved this story so much and I wish I could continue to read more. Amazing writing style. Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVED the end. I do hope that you do the wedding because i think it would be awesome. Good luck with your job hunting. If it's any comfort it sucks here on the other side of the world too. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So happy to see you're still around! I found this last chapter pretty satisfying, although the time gaps were a little weird. Little Tristan is a bit creepy! I like him, though. And the ending seems a little unfinished, like you hit pause right before the end of the movie. But on the whole I thought it was a nice wrap up and I'm grateful to finally get some closure! Please tell me you'll be posting other things. I'll keep reading. xoxo Sekhra |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah man it's the end :( I love this story! I love Rome and Ly! Well, I love alot of things in this story ;) |
![]() ![]() another wonderful chapter keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() PUT UP THE CHAPTER ON LY AND ROME'S WEDDING |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...over already? Ah well, nothing lasts forever, especially when inspiration dies. n.n I agree. It's really hard to adequately end a story when, no matter what you do, it doesn't end. And with vampires, it really doesn't end, evil long-lived things that they are. Hmm...well, interesting ending if nothing else, although I, like other readers I'm sure, would've liked to see a few small pieces of closure in the form of decisions being made, but not bad at all. Good luck on finding another job and thanks for the long story! n.n |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG YOU R AN AMAZING WRITER ! I LOVE IT...IS THIS THE LAST CHP OR R U GONNA ADD 1 OR 2 MORE...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know we're almost at the end of this story. But, I've been waiting a REALLY long time to hear the rest. So will there be more? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still loving this. I am so sorry for taking so long to review! Just know that I haven't forgotten your story :) Hope to read more soon! ~Carm~ |