Awww i love this type of stories. So cute.

Soo vewy pwetty! It was too short tho, but i liked it. He is so sexeh lolz

Aw! They are too cute! I love his new image! (I wish they had names, it confuses me. Tee hee.) But yes, I wish I could send lots and lots of reviews for that sequel. I do wish you write it, this story was great!

To be entirely honest, you need to work on your writing a little. Don't get me wrong, it was cute and all, but it was a little cheesy.

(And the sex scenes. They were kind of over before they started. You need to add some detail. Nothing graphic or disgusting, just make it flow a little better.)

I'm not trying to be a bitch or anything, I'm just trying to help. If you work on it a little, it'll be perfect in no time. ]

Wow, that was really nice. It was cute, but not to the point to where it was mushy (which is good).

i LOVED it. it was so god and it was cute