Reviews for Him and Me
allancaldera chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
Awww i love this type of stories. So cute.
xrebelmusicianx chapter 1 . 11/22/2009
Soo vewy pwetty! It was too short tho, but i liked it. He is so sexeh lolz
J.N. Simms chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Aw! They are too cute! I love his new image! (I wish they had names, it confuses me. Tee hee.) But yes, I wish I could send lots and lots of reviews for that sequel. I do wish you write it, this story was great!
Second to the Left chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
To be entirely honest, you need to work on your writing a little. Don't get me wrong, it was cute and all, but it was a little cheesy.

(And the sex scenes. They were kind of over before they started. You need to add some detail. Nothing graphic or disgusting, just make it flow a little better.)

I'm not trying to be a bitch or anything, I'm just trying to help. If you work on it a little, it'll be perfect in no time. ]
Saran D. Pity chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
Wow, that was really nice. It was cute, but not to the point to where it was mushy (which is good).
shellbell10 chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
i LOVED it. it was so god and it was cute