|Reviews for The Fall of the Aztecs|
| luvjOi chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
(Yeah i know this is 5 or around 6 years late) I like the different perspective you wrote from on this story. I like to think it was Quetzalcoatl narrating but it could be Huitzilopochtli cause he was the patron god.
But I'm gonna go with Quetzal personally lol.
| Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
This is very nice. (:
I know only the general facts of this particular history, but as I read more I thought that I could detect the details I forgot.
Just a thing before I forget. In 'The stranger’s weapon’s claimed many lives", 'weapons' does not need an apostrophe. (:
Anywho, I like the narrator's voice in this. It makes the history more personal.
I thought the last sentence ended things very well.