|Reviews for AzzHole|
| xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
I especially love the fourth and fifth stanzas. This piece has a certain boldness to it-a striking intensity. I like how its like a conversation at first, and then drops into this genuine emotion. I love the formatting too. It really impacts the piece. Great work. Thank you for the review!
| tearing hands chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
You're back! Yay.
Loved the poem. My favorite parts are "It's a sad life" (I think it gives that first stanza a really nice rhythm) and "It was some kind of vice that kept him in/ Tight, hold it." I especially loved the ending "(but he still cares.) / He still cares."
I really liked the italicized and spaced out "fluttering" in the last stanza and how you emphasized different words with italics, bold, and underline. My only criticism is that the third stanza seems a little confusing with the back-and-forth conversation and the bold and italics.