Aw, I love this story. It makes me scared of saying bye to a mate that is joining the army once we finish school. "/ Anyways, good writing.

-Becka G

omg, loved it!

Beautiful, sentimental, heart breaking, sweet, lovely and every word that can describe such an amazing story!

~Cascille~

I really liked that, but for some reason, all of the images in my head were from like World War Two. I really just can't picture anything to do with war in present tense. It's weird. I know.

Anywho. Great story, my dear.

Love Sheen

this one-shots really great :)

i like how u used the war as a seperation tool, cuz it kinda relates to reality now with the iraq war and everything.

my heart skipped a beat when i thought he was dead !

ahh. but i'm glad there was a good ending !