Reviews for my cafe girl
Imagined Insanity chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
lemme stare for a few more minutes before I actually review.

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OMGAH. i'd like propose but that would be bad.

this is amazing.

i award you plenty of less than threes.

i shouldn't review this late.

gah.

amazing.

great imagery.

so god.

...yeah.
Laura Elizabeth chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
The imagery was wonderful! It was as if this scene was actually playing out right in front of my eyes. It was simple, yet beautiful. It's amazing how someone can pay so close attention to detail without someone never even knowing. But you never know, maybe the cafe girl does know :) Your metaphors were outstanding. I also really liked that this poem was not structured, but that it still had a nice flow to it. You have captured a small moment that most would consider insignificant beautifully, and I have to say that those are the moments that really matter.

Going in my favorites, awesome job!

-Laura
Insomiak chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
Aw, I love it. It's all serious and thoughtful one moment, then simple and, I dunno, lovesick. And I like how you compared whoever it is to the sky, 'cause you can't touch the sky either. Uh, am I making sense? (heart)
LoveisAllthereIs chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
wow, that was beautiful and fun and very real. i could totally picture that whole scene, like it was playing before my eyes. great stuff!