Reviews for Wander
hazyglow chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
"And remains, hidden in the marks we leave.

Iridescent as our feelings,

Gossamer as our thoughts"

Those are very beautiful lines ... it invokes such delicate imagery, and really shows that depth in people or in things, that we may not see all the time.

:):)
felicia13 chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
"Iridescent as our feelings,

Gossamer as our thoughts:" Lovely.

The whole poem has a feeling of wandering... of being sort-of lost. Like that feeling where you know exactly where you are, but nothing looks the same. You know? That's what this feels like to me.

It's a great little snippet of a moment in time.

Felicia.