Shame...

Aw. Now both the sisters are crying. See what you did Gerry!

Intense! This is probably the main conflict but inside instead of like an actual war. I like where this story is going. It focuses on the lovers rather than, well... any thing else?

Naughty, Naughty. LOL

'Gerry had the sofa moved closer to the window so I would get better light, and carried her to it.'

Was that a mistake with the narrative POV or spelling?

I like your choice of words and the way you express their feelings. It's sweet and very well written.

'He's in love' 'Yes' 'He's doomed'. My favourite part! :)

Oh! *singsongvoice* They're going to get married!...

Oh! So interesting!

Aw... soo swet! I knew they would be good for each other. And let me guess, Gerry's blond?

I think Lord Trevelyan and Caroline would be good for each other, based on what I know.

I really like this chapter. At first I was hesitant (don't ask me why) but some part of me insisted that I read this story and I did. And I loved it! Keep up the good work!

I did read this again. I know, crazy. But I think, I will read all of your stories again. At least a lot of them. I love them.

I really love all of your work. This is my favorite story I love how Caroline's character is so innocent and sprited. Although her family doesn't care much for her, besides Megan, it hasn't discouraged her imagination.

Hey,

This is soo good, i love your writing and many stories that you have written.

Keep up the good work..

This story is pure genious..