This poem reminded me of the time I almost developed a crush on a random boy who sat beneath the tree. O.o Nice touch

This was really cute... and I'm not much for poems but it sounded a lot like a good song... not invented yet but it could make a good song XD. Great job as always!

Nice poem :) I think the last two lines are kind of odd - I dunno, like there could have been a better way to end it, but that could just be me.

I especially like: "a marathon of stress"

I like how you turned a simple observation into a really nice poem. Love the simplicity of it~

S' good. peaceful

Cittywolf