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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww this is so sad! :( Brilliantly wrote :) but so sad :( I lvoed the line 'With guardian angels off duty'! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haunting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like the feel of this poem. it seems desperate but somewhat hopeful due to the last line. nice job. yours until the wind changes, Lost |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful poem. However, I think the flow is knocked off a bit with the last line. All the other lines flow very nicely together-the last line is a bit eh. Great job! |