Aww this is so sad! :(

Brilliantly wrote :) but so sad :(

I lvoed the line 'With guardian angels off duty'!

Haunting.

i really like the feel of this poem. it seems desperate but somewhat hopeful due to the last line.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

Lost

Beautiful poem. However, I think the flow is knocked off a bit with the last line. All the other lines flow very nicely together-the last line is a bit eh. Great job!