I love this, the imagery, the meaning behind this, and the way you described rejection so very well. Amazing.

yeah, rejection hurts.

i like this. very well written. keep it up.

Remants of your soul, this is a good line. It makes me think about how one can still harness feelings for someone through their cold shoulders or contempt. This might explain why we still try to convince ourselves that there may be another way around this significant other to grab their attention.

Rejection is horrible, like you said.

'Your eyes spilling' is a superb way of saying your crying, your crestfallen, or you've lost face. Glad you found a way around 'tears or blood' trickled down my eyes. I hate, for the lack of a better word, emo-like poetry that uses blood one too many times and painful cliches that describe blood and pain together.

Anyway, if you still want to talk I'd be more than happy to.

' A Canyon-like force lingers in me, to push away From this madness while ink stains ' excellent line. Good poem. Keep it Up!

Oh yes, I know rejection quite well. This was just beautiful. I loved the second verse. This was just amazing. Really, perfect.