Reviews for Two Swans |
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![]() ![]() This story touches me emotionally, by the end i almost had tears spilling from my eyes. The end is very sad, i did not expect it. Poor Cade & Sam :( It is an excellent story. Thanks for gracing me with this Masterpiece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story up to the tragic end.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the ending is so sad..but maybe like sam said they will find each other in another life and then be together..love after death.. |
![]() ![]() oh my god... that was so heart-wrenching! it took me two-three minutes for me to click 'go' to submit a review to recover myself. yes, i was crying a few minutes ago! AHH! I LOVE THIS STORY! Even though incest never actually crossed my mind. :s |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my . . . holy FUCK. Oh my god *tries not to cry* This is a great story, though the ending ripped at my heart. Omg, why couldn't they have been together? Why did it have to end so sadly? Ah, don't pay attention to my questions; I know that this is just how the story ends, I'm just really *sniff* sad over it. Omg, so sad. I'm gonna have to find some way to get over this. I enjoyed reading this story, and I'm glad I read it, the ending is just so . . . DAMN heart wrenching. I fuckin HATE their father and I wish they could have ended up together *tries desperately to hold in tears* You wrote this beautifully; their love is so strong and pure, that's what makes this story captivating for me. I'm adding it to my C2 for incest stories and my favorites list - |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah, usually I don't read stories like this, but something drew me to this one. It's amazing. Aside from some errors in grammer (where instead of wear, things like that) it was very good. The ending was sad. Keep it up, amazing work. Faith |
![]() ![]() ![]() jeez, this was sad, and I was so looking forward to some action, the love, and yet, sorrow engulfs me. Why? Why? why couldn't he just still the little darling away instead of hanging himself. no, that's not right, but it's still going on my favs. |