I love everything and anything that you write. Please. Update. I plead you. I implore you. I beg of you. I grovel at your feet.

Please.

More please! Such a cliffhanger!

I wonder if he'll mature over time, cant wait to see Lorne!

Hmm, interesting. Are you still updating this?

Hi :D

OMG..Thats one mean cliff hanger! ;) I love the story! I am sooo looking forward to know what happens to the 2 and if they find their way back home. I just wanted to say thanks for such a great story! :D it's one of my favorite ;)

greets by amona :D

Oh hell yeah Simon! I love his sense of loyalty! it just makes me wish that there were still knight nowadays instead of the politicians that have back-stabbing "friends" that only stay to "protect" them because they want the perks.

By the way, are you going to be doing anything...special with Nars and Simon? Like life long buddies that argue all the time but have one of the strongest friendships out there?

I really don't like how Silas is turning out to be nowadays, but at least he's using this sensual new personality to its fullest by charming everyone, but it still worries me that it will bite him in the ass later.

Holy shit thats a bastard of a place to stop! I want to know dammit!

WOW. I absolutely love this-I just hope that you update soon! I have no idea what's going to happen next in this story- so exciting :)

aw...looks like nars likes simon...really cute...cant wait for more!

wow im liking this story... alot. soooo much action!

I wish you wold update this...tomorrow.

You're back! I was so happy to see this chapter :) I've missed Silas, missed Simon, and although I miss Lorne and Lundie, I really wanna find out how these Galaxians are.

And Silas! I don't think you'd kill him off... right? D: I wonder if the pirate will have to jump over and save Simon. I mean, how can Simon even find Silas in the waters with how they are? Now I'm worried about Simon too...

thank you so much for updating! I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next one! :) this is my favorite story of yours 3

awesome story so far! Please update this soon! preferably before you update other stories!

please continue

OMG! NARS! FUCKING AWESOME! SLIAS ROCKS!

PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE THIS!

THIS IS ONLY THE BEGINING. HURRY IT UP!

Oh man, there's nothing worse than reaching the end of a chapter of a story you're really enjoying then realizing there's no "next chapter" button.

This story isn't going at all the way I expected from the summary, but I love it so far. Your characters are all intriguing, and I'm actually really excited to see how Silas grows on this mission. I just finished Demons of the Heart today (great ending, btw), and this is shaping up to be even better. I can't wait for the next chapter!