i read half of it but i have to do my homework and since it is beautifully written so far, i will just add it to my favorite list and look at it some other time...

...by the way: *before i saw the stars* is me. i found the site. but not the way you told me to. but i found it nonetheless.

it won't let me do anything though. but i am just letting you know you can tell me everything now. )

Very good. I think twloha is an amazing group, and I love the quote at the top. Very good poem. A bit redundant at times, but I think that worked well with the poem and with what you were trying to say. Just try to find some synonyms for some words and spruce your vocab around a little. Otherwise than that, great job.

Faith