Reviews for Ex Marks the Spot |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, you're stories really make me laugh! How sweet was Weston?! I don't think I'd be smooching anyone after they'd just thrown up. Great little story. |
![]() ![]() this story is quite cute. I'm surprised it only got 25 reviews! it was sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aha, poor Meg! Weston seems like quite a catch, though ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuute! I liike! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story ) I suspected the guy lived in the house, with his cake being inside the fridge.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing..so funny and ironic. I especially liked the ending, and the x next to the number. Very nicely done. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meg Zettley, awesome. No, really. This is a great story. The 'X' at the end was very cute. And I like Harvey. xD Favorited. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha great on-shot! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story, I love your style of writing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I loved this and wish that you'd write more one-shots... you're quite good at them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, I'm from the review marathon (link is on my profile) I thought the dialogue in this was fab- you have a really good grasp on humour, and there were even elements of well excecuted comedic timing which was interesting to read. I think I've been to a lot of parties like the one you described so I could relate a lot to your characters. I was a little confused by the end, however, and think that you sometimes continued scenes past where they had to, making the story longer than it possibly should have been- don't be afraid to edit mercilessly at some points. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, that was cute! Loved it! -Aria |
![]() ![]() ![]() First off, I'd have to say I've never heard "Ex" as a last name before. It's a bit odd. Other than that, though, this was a very intriguing and pretty well-written oneshot. (: I liked it! Which is why I'm going to go add it to my c2 now. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() You sure like cake, don't you? Two of your stories involved cake. But good job, my girl. Very cute :) |