|Reviews for Taken Aback|
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/17/2016
stopp babbling and start writing again. please?
| Wynnfield chapter 6 . 4/10/2015
I should have expected this when I saw the word "prelude". I was like " omg are they doing it? I want read!" But then anticlimatic ;_; I need the continuation.
And this chapter was really romantic, chapter 5 too. They are really giving off the feels as couples! is Kai a love rival? or maybe some other mafia leader? Since what is a romance story without a love rival? (I just hope no sudden guy pop out from nowhere and names himself the ex of Ivane. I will cry. But it seems as though you are going to put one. I guess Ivane wouldn't have known he was a queer before he actually had a previous experience...now let me drown in my sorrows.
i am also really realllyyyyy curious about what is behind the secret doors in which he dont even let his sister see and why on Earth did Ava run off in the first place.
I think it would be inevitable for Ivane's father to find out his sexuality since by some point of time, they would be expecting a offspring. With that topic, I need to ask, since it would be important for him to get a sucessor, how is he going to get one if Adrian cant give birth? Unless Ava suddenly comes into the picture and gets pregna- urgh no, I shouldnt think of that. I greatly support IvanexAdrian!.
When real! Ava appears, would it because she got caught or she felt remorse about leaving her brother as scapegoat.
Being very curious,
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/18/2015
| firefox vixen chapter 6 . 10/30/2014
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/7/2014
The story was good, please keep writing to the end.
And the term for yakuza head is oyabun, not obuyan. But I think it's just a typo error. There are a few typo error in the previous chapters too.
| Fangirl chapter 6 . 9/25/2013
| Lunar of dreams chapter 6 . 8/13/2013
I like ur story so keep writing also I beg u please don't do that guy has a dead lover that he mostly killed because I will kill myelf like I wanted to when I read others like that and thats how he lost his smile, if it is just tell me now so I dnt have to kill myself
| magicjewel chapter 6 . 7/16/2013
up date soon! please !
| Mr. Oompa Loompa chapter 6 . 3/10/2013
UPDATE! I NEED MAWR!
| Talysse chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Hello! I love your story! You MUST update!
It s one of the best i read. It s original ant everything! What s happen with adrian, ivane or ava?
Î would like the after please! Or one end but something please! Yes? :-D
| Arisa Hanari chapter 6 . 11/17/2012
I know it has been a few years since you've updated this story, but I can't help but asking... will you continue writing this superb story? I wish you would, it was getting good too!
| hitomi65 chapter 2 . 10/29/2012
| 4everFanfiction chapter 6 . 9/14/2012
Omyfckinshittykitty! I love this tucky story! Pls
Dont stop with it and i am sure there are a lot of ppl thinkin that too but hot kitty damm ! U have made a wonderful storrry
| als chapter 6 . 8/14/2012
I love this story please update this! It's so good!
| Wings of Beauty chapter 6 . 6/9/2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Update ! I absolutely love this story! Please update! This story is so good!