| Reviews for Asadian Nights |
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   annabanana1994 chapter 4 . 7/8/2016 I love this story! please keep it going! |
| XxSpiceyXWallFlowerxX chapter 1 . 12/2/2009 can't wait to read more. |
| BlueAki chapter 1 . 9/19/2009 Hm, this is interesting. So he's not human? And the plot thickens...lol |
| CoryD chapter 4 . 4/18/2009 Good chapter, enjoyable story so far. One thing - an editing and readability issue. I don't know if it is just getting lost in the upload, but there are no indicators of scene & perspective changes, which makes the read not flow easily. You need a line or something to indicate the changes in location & characters. |
| Ajaz chapter 4 . 4/10/2009 “My father wishes me to marry another but it is you that I want, Prince Kenjara. I feel a connection with you that I haven’t felt with any other. Also, with the brains of my people and the bronze of yours, there will be nothing that we can’t have. You can bring peace to many just by agreeing to wed me.” I think the word your thinking of is "brawns", not "bronze". Sorry, I'm being nitpicky today because I'm tired. X I do like the idea of this story but the names are a bit confusing - and I am still unsure as to what exactly Kenjara looks like. |
| Ajaz chapter 3 . 4/10/2009 In the 12th paragraph from the bottom, I believe you meant "no one will BE hurt", instead of "no one will hurt." |
| Ajaz chapter 2 . 4/10/2009 In the last sentence, you write "life" instead of "like". |
| Ajaz chapter 1 . 4/10/2009 I think you might have written "Kenarith" instead of "Kenjara" in this chapter in the 6th paragraph from bottom. |
| kris89 chapter 4 . 4/9/2009 im curious about how the rest of this is going to go. the story is great so far, i just usually wait until the writers have done at least 10 chapters before i start reading. that way there is less of a chance that things will go on hiatus just when things are getting good. |
| pinkeclipse chapter 4 . 4/9/2009 he needs to woo her, gain her trust... |
| blackrule chapter 3 . 2/20/2009 hmm interesting story here. I love other dimensions hehe makes things so much more fun. Can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work! :) |
| xiomara209 chapter 3 . 11/26/2008 love the story concept.. |
| Katherine-the-greate chapter 3 . 11/23/2008 wow. what a cliffhanger. i like the war thing and the orphans too. I think my favorite part, though, was the door handle. super cool. please update again soon |
| Katherine-the-greate chapter 1 . 11/10/2008 great work. i really like your intro and the suspense hook. i can't wait to see how and when they find his mate! |
| KARLA611 chapter 3 . 11/10/2008 Your story is very good so far... What happened after Jennifer promises? |