Reviews for Breathe
daughterofmusic chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I love the feeling this poem gives, of being disconnected with the world and everything around you, and yet subconsciously noticing every small detail and being partially alert.

Love it!

~Daughter of Music
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
i think that this was very nice and well written. the formatting gave your poem more life. that was a good idea for this kind of piece. good work.