Reviews for Breathe
daughterofmusic chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I love the feeling this poem gives, of being disconnected with the world and everything around you, and yet subconsciously noticing every small detail and being partially alert.

Love it!

Daughter of Music
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/4/2008
i think that this was very nice and well written. the formatting gave your poem more life. that was a good idea for this kind of piece. good work.