Reviews for Stolen
Silvren Raine chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
this is really god... :-D but... who's child is it's?
Janice chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
wow, ash, i love this one. i love how its written and wat its about.

cyanidecandy chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
awesome ! love how u structured this :)

subtle yet meaningful

i'm going through all ur stories hehe.
Billie.Joelle chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
Wow. so emotional, so perfect! Qmazing, amazing. Good job
onlyuptosaveit chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
I like this. It's unique. I especially like how every bit starts off with "She stole." I'm sure the way I interpret it is different from how you or others see it, but still... Very nicely done.

PS: Fall Out Boy rocks my life!
dabombticktick chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
wait so she had his baby right?

but i dont get the furniture part...

do you mean she took over his place? sry im confuzzled


it was realy good :]

me love

your loyal reader,

Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Awesome, origional, really well written, yesh, good to see a Melbornian on, might have to add you when I review more I like.

Keep writing!
HollowxPromises chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Oh, who's baby is it?

I'm kinda dense like that.

Either way, love the repitition of the lines and I loved the fact you could spell unlike myself. The repitition really helped bring the reader to wonder what was going to happen next.
Love.Hug.Kiss chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Que bello!1Its beutiful
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Beautiful as always

Kali Shaelyn chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
An nice and sweet short piece. Simple but dramatic.
kentuckygirl145541 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
Absolutely beautiful...i loved it ]
bee bee chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
like it

i know it's supposed to be short

but could be a bit lees generic and a bit more descriptive

i feel like the end got cut off

like there should be more

but maybe that's just me

i can say i will be reading more of your works

intriguing, your story was.

SummerBaby94 chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
short and sweet. :)