i like the feeling of this poem... like you say very /raw and honest/ ...and the whole thing is enhanced by the use of italics and bold print... great job thankyou for sharing :]

I really like the way you used italics, bold print, and underlines. It gives the poem a flow that would otherwise be absent. And I also like that it doesn't rhyme. Rhyming would probably ruin this amazing piece you've written.