hm...im wondering what will happen next to our poor hero.

this was so funny and so cute! i thought it was an excellent twist on Sleeping Beauty and i really want to continue!

That is a brillinat take on Sleeping Beauty. I'm very jealous becasue I wish I'd thought of it.

The beginning got me hooked, and it was very fast paced. I would have liked some more description though, although I suppose james wouldn't have time to notice things too much if he was running for his life.

I did enjoy reading this though, there were some amusing moments. Espeacially the princess hurling the contents of her bedroom at him.

It's very interesting, though more towards the hilarious side since most of us knows the story of sleeping beauty! XD

I liked it and I'd enjoy reading on. You really ought to continue it! (Just for the fun of it!)

I thought this was hilarious. I too always wondered about different ends to well-known fairytales, such as Sleep Beauty or Little Mermaid... Continue, please!

(...James must be flabbergasted, instead of getting a reward, he is sent to the dungeon! _)

I thought that was quite fun. There were a few grammar things wrong with it but I liked it. James' confusion was really quite sweet.

Ah! You have to finish this story! I can't wait to find out what happens next!